Own picture for criticism

[NATA NOVA]

yaltarom, working with nature?

[yaltarom]

Сообщение от NATA NOVA

yaltarom, working with nature?

 "The Wave", canvas, 50h60.maslo - from nature (in the creation of the plein air work-up to 3 months) ...

Sunflower, "To meet the sun, 45х50, canvas, with photos, with small changes (sorry, still not seen after the new year no one living, even though we now +20)

[klimvor]

You are my frank shokiruete! And I'm trying.
They too were in the trash :------ always respected people keen painter and not only us raduyte other works. "With humor I have always been tightly .

[Причал]

Hold -
pier Radish bitter, but useful:

The first picture did not cause me irritation. Yes, shortcomings dofiga, even for an amateur, but she would not go.

Now, about sunflowers:
Have you ever noticed how vulgar looks like a woman, if her time and a short skirt and cleavage? when she's at the same time clearly wearing makeup and lips and eyes?
You nakrasili his sunflower and lips and eyes. "
That fascinated you something (in this case, sunflower). Why do you have such a cloud in the sky? You could make the sky-blue monotonously. Would have been a quite ordinary-a dekorativka.
Can be monotonous gray (if it is good to find shade, and texture - might have done quite a good dekorativka).

And could very well think, and leave that line the horizon - then would happen to the sun-sunflower looks at the world from the heavens. Only it is necessary to remove all of these play-streamers in the sky, and more graphic quality to leave the plane and just division of the sky and the earth.

In the Wave I do did not find anything - it overwhelmed all the "alley", "Arbat" and "noses"

[Игорь Гурьев]

Сообщение от yaltarom

Sunflower, "To meet the sun, 45х50, canvas, with photos

"Never write on the photo. She always betray themselves boredom. Valentin Serov.

[yaltarom]

Were you part soglasen.No photos can be used for, for example, forms tsvetka.Ya saw sunflowers in his childhood when he lived in sele.I where I'll find it in the winter in the Crimea ? "Painting" The wave was sold for $ 400, and the owner of the painting said openly that the plot is very simple ... said, and bought ..
 So ... about the photo before this was a picture of the sea with a picture where I liked the mountains and the sky background, and the sea-that allowed my imagination, "" Rapture ", it was sold for 800 USD and I long this case analiziroval.Dlya philistine to sea and not always my fantasy, as the painting "The Wave"
Another painting (70x50 "Dream of the rest" began with a photo, where the calm sea, but at the time of writing, got bored and giving dry, wrote at the top druguyu.Naskolko it better or worse ... but it was interesting to write drugaya.Ee , moreover, that it was large.
Here, I agree with you, write on the photo copy of the exact bored

[yaltarom]

Following such criticism is not a sin to write


... Sometimes it seems that it is better not to write, but passes a month and you wonder how you can not feel this tinge year ago


Your criticism of my finished 2 paintings:

[Pavel]

Сообщение от yaltarom

After this criticism is not a sin to write

... Sometimes it seems that it is better not to write, but passes a month and you wonder how you can not feel this tinge year ago

Your criticism of my 2 finished painting:

Everyone gets what one deserves, and most importantly no need to hurry. Maybe try to run?
Judging by the work you're going to get rich quick on the painting, immediately offer to sell. Why fooling.

[K-Maler]

Сообщение от yaltarom

Requires evaluation of the first work as a basis for continuing or reason for termination
Thank you for your openness

 
Wrong assumption. The first work will never be a decision one way or the other side ... Most importantly, you do not know what to do and ... caught the eye of painting and ... could be painting? And then for what? What do you expect from this activity? Ask yourself honestly, whether you're ready for this difficult and often thankless, work ...

[sur]

Landscapes you do not have bad obtained with the mood.
Well beyond the sea, but it seems to me a lot in it by Aivazovsky.