Own picture for criticism
 

2008 g.Holst, 30x40. Alla Prima "boat"
The first painting in his life, without art education.
Over 2 years are 12 paintings.
Requires evaluation of the first work as a basis for continuation or reason for termination :)
Thank you for openness

A small version of, well, an increase not ochen.A so, continue.

Work in 3 hours

For this size, it very much. If you continue, you will be able to do this for 10-15 minutes. Of course, if you have prepared a general background.

Thank you again, after this picture, I switched to a multi-layer painting, although the sketches is just doing half a chasa.Uchus at MF Tihopoy and Shevchenko TS-beautiful, not only artists but also people.
Always amazed at the works of old masters, which can be seen on this site, they are simple and good.

Here I am with you do not agree ... For 10 minutes, so do not write ... but 30 - 40 minutes, it's my really ...

For the self-taught very well .... Smarter!

Well, this is unlikely.

Usually, one layer at an amount takes about thirty minutes to forty.

Picture is illustrative: is, in general, from some shortcomings, which are in plain sight.

Aaaa!, All bad, all is lost :) "If possible, the deficiencies in more detail, for me it is important, especially now.

Written badly, in the trash .... do not forget to indicate where the rubbish dump is !::)

You are my frank shokiruete! And I'm staralsya.Dayu photo last complete picture "Towards the Sun" and sold the last "surge"
They were also in the trash :)