Own picture for criticism

[John Preston]

And I just the first image - "Poppy field" - like the more ...
There is in it something more involved.
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[Posav]

yaltarom, for example, wants to advise fifth of white paint over hard - compound . Especially since the actual foam has many shades of tone. It is as if a suspension is constantly changing tone . There is a problem whitish. More strokes I seem overwritten , as in classical paintings , they must be rich . Look for example at Stozharov strokes , but his painting too gingerbread . Then, by the study and representatives of the severe style ( Korzhev ). Aivazovsky strokes are thin, with transparency , but not erased.

[Ika-Ika]

Сообщение от John Preston; 1677621"

And I just the first image - " Poppy field " - like the more ... There is in it something more involved .

But in all these works , there is something attractive and trudnoformuliruemoe .
The only possible workaround is to vary the format rabot.Oni all you have almost kvadratnye.A that if a very long wave of write like front fascia , let's say 40h120 and all of its complex shape traced from the beginning to be felt kontsa.Togda emptiness of the sea.

[yaltarom]

Posav, thanks for the precise definition of the error ! I liked the cleanliness Stozharov krasok.Ya also made ​​transitions in grayscale strokes other colors, but in opposite , or " shouting" > colors I did blur.
Thanks for the Helium Korzheva ! I liked the "Clouds 1945" Anxiety in the picture.

  Ika-Ika, thank you ! I thought about this format , but the nature of the sketches I do visually square , I just see a fragment of nature in a way >
I just did not think that you can write just a fragment of a sketch

[NATA NOVA]

Сообщение от Fed

one problem-it is about anything (it should be someone there to adapt into the bargain).
Maybe this sketch?
Size of your notes there.

And I was just very, this "niochemnost" and fascinating ..

yaltarom, what size and price? (Sea)

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yaltarom, write to the Sea "about anything" - "niochem" by the way, here's the title of the exhibition!

[yaltarom]

Сообщение от NATA NOVA

And I was just very , this " niochemnost " and fascinating ..
yaltarom, what size and price ? (Sea)

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yaltarom, write to the Sea " about anything " - " niochem " by the way, here's the title of the exhibition !

 To be honest , to work out 2 days > (with sketch ) The final glaze I do not think is higher than the rest !

 Size 40x50, coarse holst.Tak as a day on my main profession earnings of $ 200 per day
(photos, created by my pizzeria is completely destroyed by the Italians and bake me a new creation ), then here I have not worked , and the rest >
Therefore the price in 1600 USD . unframed , plus or pine frame (200) or oak - array (350) ( separate frame does not sell, wait -it-yourself month t.k.ispolniteli very spoiled : cool >
   Expected surge in the negative ( or positive >) at the first picture , before it suffered unnecessarily with the color of poppies (the picture from the river ) , finally gave up the foreground for a week, but did not give peace poppies

[yaltarom]

Сообщение от Ika-Ika

Yes, in all these works , there is something attractive and trudnoformuliruemoe .
The only possible workaround is to vary the format rabot.Oni all you have almost kvadratnye.A that if a very long wave of write like front fascia , let's say 40h120 and all of its complex shape traced from the beginning to be felt kontsa.Togda emptiness of the sea.

  If I understand correctly , you can simply modify one of my sketches ?

  This is unusual and new to me and wonder .....

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Good evening! Thank you for the unexpected support and praise !
"yaltarom, write to the Sea" about anything "-" niochem " by the way, here's the name of the show! "
Niochem is what will make or attract people, but when they see the work they will seek support for name in the papers ?
   My "show" pass directly on objects , which I rent out to customers , they buy without criticism , but there is no soul , there's just money!
So was the dream of vystavke.Ili too early ?

[yaltarom]

Thank you for the unexpected support and praise !

NATA NOVA
"yaltarom, write to the Sea" about anything "-" niochem " by the way, here's the name of the show! "
Niochem is what will make or attract people, but when they see the work they will seek support for name in the papers ?
   My "show" pass directly on objects , which I rent out to customers , they buy without criticism, but there is no soul , there's just money!
So was the dream of vystavke.Ili too early ?

[Кирилл Сызранский]

Сообщение от yaltarom

why was the dream of vystavke.Ili too early?

The exhibition of some marinas - a boring show.

[Ika-Ika]

Сообщение от yaltarom; 1678083"

If I understand correctly , you can simply modify one of my sketches ?

Yes, you can do anything , but in this case less than think about the money , the better poluchaetsya.I bear on public debate their work and asking advice from all over the world about where to go and what to do next , and wrong lukavo.Sami write and do everything dumayte.Knizhki look.