Own picture for criticism

[Pluh]

Сообщение от yaltarom

And in this my latest works by Aivazovsky from nothing?
Accept criticism with great pleasure

Spaced at equal distance inarticulate boat. Skyline walk "on the waves" and climbs into the foreground. Mast "backed" the cloud ... and just deadly dull track.

[Fed]

Сообщение от yaltarom

And in this my latest works by Aivazovsky from nothing?

Small photos are very hard to see for real discussion.
While I can only say if the cut-up-all above the clouds, would be "dramatic" glow. Or above the cloud-top as a red sunset.
And so just distracting, dividing the painting into two parts.
With boobies, I think, - very successfully. A "court" clearly require details. On the sea I can not say, not very clear.

[galatey]

yaltarom, a good excuse and I den.uzh podklyuchus.more-painfully florid and boundaries of this tsvetisosti bright vyrazheny.posmotrite sea still have a.Bogolyubova.

[yaltarom]

Thank you so much that I !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....... about:

Alexei Petrovich Bogolyubov.
Lido.
Venice.

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Why netkritiki "Reflection of Autumn"?

[Pecheneg]

Сообщение от yaltarom

I will accept criticism with great pleasure

Yachts are not expressive ... The Sea "ragged, razdryzganoe too colorful ..."
Horizon krivoy.Net unity of water and air and light ....

Сообщение от yaltarom

"Autumn Reflection"

I do not see the fall ... just a forest stream ..

IMHO

[Seriy]

boats are loaded with tons of pain, sit deep in the water :-)
Bright yellow-orange stain strongly complicates everything. If you have made such an intense spot of one color, then you need to do another spot a complementary color of the same intensity, otherwise the picture will look weird, must be the overall color balance. IMHO, it is impossible to give a single color-intensive, and the rest were subdued. The same problem in the fall with a blue spot in the creek.
Composition is too simple, no intrigue. Why not used by the stream pririsovat animals, birds? or rights away?

[Алек Сандер]

Excuse me, that fit, but I think this thread does not really fit to discuss their work. One job is all right, but there is an entire discussion. There is a great department, "Artists, Creativity, there has long and successfully communicate with the artists present at the forum, and podnatorevshie in art connoisseurs. There's talk and classical and contemporary. But this branch are all designed to determine the authorship of works and their prices ...

Otherwise, we just littered forum.

[yaltarom]

Thank you for zamechanie.Primite izvineniya.Sleduschie work is featured there

[yaltarom]

Sometimes to the words spoken by you, come and understand their writing on the expiration of a few pictures.

Thank you in advance for your suggestions and comments.

So, some of his sketches and paintings

[Fed]

Сообщение от yaltarom; 1677473"

a few of his sketches and paintings

Your progress is amazing. So would everyone.
1st picture - you have talent clearly depict the sea, why waste your time .
2- I - was excellent, although I liked her more artistic picture of the last - but - at last - it is a problem about anything (it should be someone there to adapt into the bargain ). Maybe this sketch? Size of your notes there .
3-rd - poster cyanotic, although there are fans . After a 2,4,5 - apparent retreat .
Fourth , very small, but very pleasant. More will not tell , baby.

In the fourth already has the saturation effect. If it works in progress as (2.5 ) to include a good song is something that you can better , ships , rocks , castles , people, or even some sort of the highlight , then, in my opinion, and the audience wanting more is impudence.