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In my opinion, everything is all very understandable - K-Maler lucidly explained:
 

Сообщение от K-Maler

Someone trained and failed. Composition is confident and hand. Everything else ... He did not cope with "teploholodnostyu, all razbeleno, ideas, no scenery, the trees are the same ... A signature? Under this etude signature does not raise, the more so by the unsuccessful ...

In general, wrote the artist in explanation Shishkina as managed. A mock-why? Well, vdaril once, twice, and senseless why beat? And there is something in this sketch, for example, "veil of time". You, heir, they themselves have written: "I would take if you do not translate from French into Russian." About the translation can forget - take it.