Artist Pablo <! - ~ 1 ~ ->

[Pablo]

Another: "The fish is dried"

Wrote in a free manner, for me in a new way.

72h44 cm

Oil on plywood

[Seriy]

Pablo, the song itself is good, plastic movement, but diagonal-diamonds - I do not know ...
And please, when you show the work to specify the size and technique.

[Pablo]

Сообщение от Seriy

Pablo, but the diagonal-diamonds - I do not know ...
And please, when you show the work to specify the size and technology.

Have >

And as rhombs - the only thing that came to mind on the scale >

[Pablo]

Next:


"Still life with a vase of Cezanne on a white towel"

hardboard, oil

53h37


I wanted to convey the feeling


Thank you for your attention

[Сергей Дородный]

Pablo, you are done.

Only:
1. The pattern on the tissues (the wallpaper, houses) is not so clearly visible - it is necessary to mute.
2. Far above the apple in "brick" shadow goes "pink" smear - it is unclear what it means - but it is a fantasy, and it breaks the form in this place.
3. Right apple - what about him? When your abilities primary question - discipline.
4. Left apple - is (IMHO) lost concentration and decided to experiment strokes and color. Not held. Whether wool, or peach. It happens. Who survived the transfer of such surfaces.
5. Near an apple - drowned?
6. Stool legs shimmy dance dance?
7. Far fragment "towels" - the brightest. He "gets out" closer pitcher - see? Machen discipline.


Drawing geometric surfaces (vase) - yet without komentov.
Lighting scheme is also not fully identified. Glare, glare is ... (Yes the shadows: eek <! - ~ 1 ~ ->

BUT! In general, because the Veri Veri-!

(Fish once I could make out - there long. But the "diamonds" - a great creative discovery. They (diamonds) - may like or
not like subjectively (as swine hryaschik), but objectively - no fine blunders there.
Good luck.

Threat. And drop the fiction - "regular" (and it is "extraordinary"?), "Wanted to convey the feeling" (and what else to do the artist?), "He wrote in a free manner," (You're an artist - how it happened - and wrote. No special "manners" there to be seen, you are not yet Picasso to allocate manners).

[Кирилл Сызранский]

Сообщение от Sergei burly, 2379621

only:

Before the apple on the towel is a knife?

[Сергей Дородный]

Сообщение от Cyril Syzran

Before apples lying on a towel knife ?

  I reminded spatula. But I think - peretemnennaya (and on the left side - peresvetlennaya ) shadow .
You see , Pablo, I wrote to you about the need to avoid "accidents " - touching, similarity, etc. Puzzles absolutely harmful. ( And as the right tone - is itself ).

[Pablo]

Cyril Syzran, but , according to Sergey burly, it peresvetlennaya shadow.

By the way , Sergey burly, the extraordinary , yet , it happens. To me, the extraordinary - pocherkushki pencil, charcoal , etc. . >
Again , a lot of people just draw pictures, it's a question of feelings > If the previous pictures I pitched his vision of form , here - the thrill of objects , shadows , highlights , etc. Apples just red , two sources of light, rickety stool ... in general , though , the experiment was a success in my opinion.
But , in fact , the main character :

[Кирилл Сызранский]

Сообщение от Sergei burly, 2379701

I reminded spatula.

Exactly!
>

Сообщение от Pablo

And here is the main character

What good.
To him many things and do not need, and extra bright draperies will not disturb him, he is in itself interesting, both in form and texture, and color.

[Pablo]

Cyril Syzran, one it too freely, even made room >