Artist Valery Rybakov

[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, your work has been interesnee.Yavnoe-improvement work goes slowly on some static Trapped, a schematic of your first rabot.Poyavlyaetsya dynamism, liveliness, interes.Kompozitsii interesting, scenic view shire.Bolshe going to write-will zhivee.Po more about what can be changed for the better storonu.V first job: Effective razbel sky wish teplee.Eto apparently some cirrus clouds, but they always reflect light solntsa.Dazhe if in fact we see them as white heat mnogo.Tak they'll be better "traction" with the warm tones in zemli.Sineva vverhnem left corner of the tone is not dark there (in the photo is not very clear), this work is successful in its simplicity, is expressed sut.Vo second work is not clear plane lands . The road goes up, or horizontally in the future? misty distance probably a little warmer, there is also the same colors of autumn, though in more tumane.I-stroke mastehinom, this is by using what you modeliruesh.Kladya this module (molecule painting) everywhere equal to the value you add static kartine.Poluchaetsya a sort of brick kladka.V trees should be determined: whether it leaves the module, then do mnshe, or a large mass of leaves and twigs, then do not ubeditelna.Tozhe bolshe.Nekaya mediating in the third rabote.Esche it is not very clear pronounced source osveschniya.Nebo it is not very responsive, and for such a hot bottom, the sky should be teplee.Eto noon, morning or evening? "All of nature is interrelated with the sky, osveschniem, time of day, hence the teni.Dazhe if you write out of my head it must be for the greater ubeditelnosti.Kompozitsiya work neplohaya.Neyasna bright band in the background, under the so-derevyami.A full poryadok.Esli who wants to add the works ask to join obsuzhdeniyu.Valery also do not mind, I know. < ! - ~ 1 ~ ->

[Валерий Рыбаков]

Peter, I read your words, look at the work - and I say to myself - yes, really, and how I did not see. After all, you show me the obvious and simple defect in my work. Thank you Peter for his help in improving!

[L-ana64110]

I want to have to draw your attention to the prospect of Valery-linear and aerial, if very simple - a linear clearly define the horizon line on your eye, then clearly diogonali build roads and trees in the canvas \\ builds \\, the farther the objects so they are smaller and in color less saturated, the layer of air "erases" brightness, the closer the objects, so they are richer in color.
 I remember when I was in love with impasto painting I had "my own super-idea" of 10 square centimeters of at least 6-8 mixtures of color and so on across the plane of the picture, plus not to lose the overall color,, it was interesting!

[Валерий Рыбаков]

Interesting views on this work:

[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, running figure revives songs of the road, but here the viewer himself as though he were standing on the road and looks vdal.Perspektivnye reduction of land and sky resemble "photographic." Usually, the lens gives the following, but can be used as reception to highlight the term, but you can not do it chasto.Nesmotrya on light overcast light of the sun a lot, talking about it illuminated yellow plants, then the sky warmer toward the horizon haze of fumes can also look for color vlagi.Tut plana.Zemlya driving behind a tree is a little fence, still pack would not hurt, colder, almost golubinki.Peredny plan normalno.V shadows under the plants must have a blue-violet must be present on a bright day, it is the same as an extra to the yellow budet.Derevo in shadow or not? Breakdown of leaves by illumination, even on a cloudy day will prisutstvovat.Ni and shadow of the clouds are too dark, they compete with the tone of wood, dorogi.Eto do not smoke from the fire. In general, the work looks tselno.Kto of the artists will continue on the topic would be useful for Valeria.

[Валерий Рыбаков]

I wonder your opinion on the new pictures

[Валерий Рыбаков]

I noticed an interesting thing: when I used to write these pictures (like this new) - sales were constant and stable.
And I started trying to paint presented above in my posts - was simply a "silence" on the sales ....
What paradox? <!--~ 10 ->

[L-ana64110]

This is not a paradox and regularity, you recently trying to go as all the processing and you like all-student does not interest "?
Go back to yourself!!
Be sincere with yourself! People feel it and buy the sincerity !

[Валерий Рыбаков]

Frankly, this idea I visited ...

Thank you, L-ana64110

[Marta]

Сообщение от Valery Rybakov

noticed an interesting thing: when I used to write these pictures (like this new) - sales were constant and stable.
And I started trying to paint presented above in my posts - was simply a "silence" on the sales ....
What paradox?
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In my opinion, this new art is much more than the older and better than others. It is only at first glance, it echoes the work on the front pages. But more interesting was because you were working on a new over the landscape. Everything is connected. With regard to landscape, then I think you would benefit from work with nature at sunset, at dawn on a cloudy day, sunny, etc. And search as a color to convey a fundamentally different states of nature. For you, the color is important. (Although if you were black and white versions, then - is not excluded, too, could get interesting, dynamic ). But not a la postcard standard tsvete.A then come back to where you want.
And with sales always the case. Do not strain. Just now the pendulum has swung in your direction not .