Artist Valery Rybakov

[Валерий Рыбаков]

That this work in conjunction with the previous can be called a kind of form an individual style?

[Игорь Гурьев]

Сообщение от Valery Rybakov

It is this work in conjunction with the previous can be called a kind of form an individual style?

Adolf straight.
Monticelli.

[LCR]

Сообщение от Guriev, Igor

Direct Adolf.
Monticelli.

Do not invent, Mr. Igor Guriev, nothing like!

[Кирилл Сызранский]

Сообщение от Guriev, Igor

Direct Adolf.
Monticelli.

Well, remember, it can be, and not only him ...

[Peter]

Сообщение от Valery Rybakov

It is this work in conjunction with the previous can be called a kind of form an individual style?

It's still kind of happy with crude, slightly mannered paintings (by the way is a fairly common way, in almost every omnivore salonchike occurs). Valeriy Please do not be offended!
Yes, to sell her amateur amateur can, but then we want more! "Stay still uchenikom.Progress you already zameten.Pri permanent job with color, tone, figure out your dough can get individual stil.Tolko sure at the time of sale, when the write . 'We try so interesting to buy? "And now the so-buy?
Tell someone how to buy? "Yes, it does not buy vopros.No good money will pay only for iskusstvo.K this must podrasti.Zhelayu luck !

[Валерий Рыбаков]

A couple of new things:

[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, work became more interesting, much livelier, better for tsvetu.V first job interesting play of colors in light and shadow on the situation zemle.Nedostatki see in nebe.Ton spots above the center is too dark for clearances the sky above it and levee.Tsvetovaya its nature a different plan than the sky at gorizonta.Da, correctly, the lower, the lighter and warmer, but in this case violated the unity of composition kolorita.Po endured vertical, can any branch slightly sideways to let . The second work-sky good, lively, dynamic prisutstvuyut.Vtoroy and a third plans to tonu.Voda want to spread a little apart from the sky, too high lighted, threw out the lower right corner may be a little darker, that expanse of water "missed." Let more artists would look, all your vzglyad.No "steps in the right direction," as told Sharapov filma.Zhelayu of luck!

[Posav]

In the first strike the eye too big and too one-directional strokes across the top, and bottom of the stroke and no. Must be the opposite. Below, the first plan - major strokes, and the top distance - smaller brush strokes and flat, not bulky.
At the bottom of the second snow or expanse of water? For the surface of the water is too crooked plane, and if the snow, then why the reeds so well preserved.
(PS do not feed bread - give certain things to criticize)

[Валерий Рыбаков]

Regular motives spatula ...

[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, your work has been interesnee.Yavnoe-improvement work goes slowly on some static Trapped, a schematic of your first rabot.Poyavlyaetsya dynamism, liveliness, interes.Kompozitsii interesting, scenic view shire.Bolshe going to write-will zhivee.Po more about what can be changed for the better storonu.V first job: Effective razbel sky wish teplee.Eto apparently some cirrus clouds, but they always reflect light solntsa.Dazhe if in fact we see them as white heat mnogo.Tak they'll be better "traction" with the warm tones in zemli.Sineva vverhnem left corner of the tone is not dark there (in the photo is not very clear), this work is successful in its simplicity, is expressed sut.Vo second work is not clear plane lands . The road goes up, or horizontally in the future? misty distance probably a little warmer, there is also the same colors of autumn, though in more tumane.I-stroke mastehinom, this is by using what you modeliruesh.Kladya this module (molecule painting) everywhere equal to the value you add static kartine.Poluchaetsya a sort of brick kladka.V trees should be determined: whether it leaves the module, then do mnshe, or a large mass of leaves and twigs, then do not ubeditelna.Tozhe bolshe.Nekaya mediating in the third rabote.Esche it is not very clear pronounced source osveschniya.Nebo it is not very responsive, and for such a hot bottom, the sky should be teplee.Eto noon, morning or evening? "All of nature is interrelated with the sky, osveschniem, time of day, hence the teni.Dazhe if you write out of my head it must be for the greater ubeditelnosti.Kompozitsiya work neplohaya.Neyasna bright band in the background, under the so-derevyami.A full poryadok.Esli who wants to add the works ask to join obsuzhdeniyu.Valery also do not mind, I know. < ! - ~ 1 ~ ->