Artist Valery Rybakov

[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, your work has been interesnee.Yavnoe-improvement work goes slowly on some static Trapped, a schematic of your first rabot.Poyavlyaetsya dynamism, liveliness, interes.Kompozitsii interesting, scenic view shire.Bolshe going to write-will zhivee.Po more about what can be changed for the better storonu.V first job: Effective razbel sky wish teplee.Eto apparently some cirrus clouds, but they always reflect light solntsa.Dazhe if in fact we see them as white heat mnogo.Tak they'll be better "traction" with the warm tones in zemli.Sineva vverhnem left corner of the tone is not dark there (in the photo is not very clear), this work is successful in its simplicity, is expressed sut.Vo second work is not clear plane lands . The road goes up, or horizontally in the future? misty distance probably a little warmer, there is also the same colors of autumn, though in more tumane.I-stroke mastehinom, this is by using what you modeliruesh.Kladya this module (molecule painting) everywhere equal to the value you add static kartine.Poluchaetsya a sort of brick kladka.V trees should be determined: whether it leaves the module, then do mnshe, or a large mass of leaves and twigs, then do not ubeditelna.Tozhe bolshe.Nekaya mediating in the third rabote.Esche it is not very clear pronounced source osveschniya.Nebo it is not very responsive, and for such a hot bottom, the sky should be teplee.Eto noon, morning or evening? "All of nature is interrelated with the sky, osveschniem, time of day, hence the teni.Dazhe if you write out of my head it must be for the greater ubeditelnosti.Kompozitsiya work neplohaya.Neyasna bright band in the background, under the so-derevyami.A full poryadok.Esli who wants to add the works ask to join obsuzhdeniyu.Valery also do not mind, I know. < ! - ~ 1 ~ ->