In the first strike the eye too big and too one-directional strokes across the top, and bottom of the stroke and no. Must be the opposite. Below, the first plan - major strokes, and the top distance - smaller brush strokes and flat, not bulky.
At the bottom of the second snow or expanse of water? For the surface of the water is too crooked plane, and if the snow, then why the reeds so well preserved.
(PS
do not feed bread - give certain things to criticize)
