[Peter]

Valery Rybakov, work became more interesting, much livelier, better for tsvetu.V first job interesting play of colors in light and shadow on the situation zemle.Nedostatki see in nebe.Ton spots above the center is too dark for clearances the sky above it and levee.Tsvetovaya its nature a different plan than the sky at gorizonta.Da, correctly, the lower, the lighter and warmer, but in this case violated the unity of composition kolorita.Po endured vertical, can any branch slightly sideways to let . The second work-sky good, lively, dynamic prisutstvuyut.Vtoroy and a third plans to tonu.Voda want to spread a little apart from the sky, too high lighted, threw out the lower right corner may be a little darker, that expanse of water "missed." Let more artists would look, all your vzglyad.No "steps in the right direction," as told Sharapov filma.Zhelayu of luck!