And I left more. I do not know, as in the original, but the picture just want poshurshat leaves. The mood is.
Right, in my opinion, would be a better composition, if a good crop from the bottom third. As for color, too, think that green does not fit, especially in the right. And so, not very clear objective. Even if the task was to get away from nature, create the impression (what?), It is difficult to do this out of my head (it is in such a manner). Ie field observations are needed. It seems to me
