After the first 2 pages did not go into your theme , for the reasons noted by another participant . And suddenly we looked , we had to flip through the rest .
2 is potentially a very good job . It is a pity that such a size put a lot of effort. But over and perfected only the central group . If everything was done as would have been without question the first work to the exhibition.
I have already advised one participant - the top you can take and arduous , that is more elements visible " complexity " that is inherent in , for example, outsiders . Whose energy and painstaking work in surprise .
This applies to the latter work .
You do craving for more elements. Maybe this is your way - complicated , thorny work , but only as a perfected , without the " laziness " on the edges.
I imagined how would this work looked well decorated ...
In general, less is better , but carefully.
But on the other hand - at last .
