Own picture for criticism
 

2008 g.Holst, 30x40. Alla Prima "boat"
The first painting in his life, without art education.
Over 2 years are 12 paintings.
Requires evaluation of the first work as a basis for continuation or reason for termination :)
Thank you for openness

A small version of, well, an increase not ochen.A so, continue.

Work in 3 hours

For this size, it very much. If you continue, you will be able to do this for 10-15 minutes. Of course, if you have prepared a general background.

Thank you again, after this picture, I switched to a multi-layer painting, although the sketches is just doing half a chasa.Uchus at MF Tihopoy and Shevchenko TS-beautiful, not only artists but also people.
Always amazed at the works of old masters, which can be seen on this site, they are simple and good.

Here I am with you do not agree ... For 10 minutes, so do not write ... but 30 - 40 minutes, it's my really ...

For the self-taught very well .... Smarter!

Well, this is unlikely.

Usually, one layer at an amount takes about thirty minutes to forty.

Picture is illustrative: is, in general, from some shortcomings, which are in plain sight.

Aaaa!, All bad, all is lost :) "If possible, the deficiencies in more detail, for me it is important, especially now.

Written badly, in the trash .... do not forget to indicate where the rubbish dump is !::)

You are my frank shokiruete! And I'm staralsya.Dayu photo last complete picture "Towards the Sun" and sold the last "surge"
They were also in the trash :)

yaltarom, working with nature?

 "The Wave", canvas, 50h60.maslo - from nature (in the creation of the plein air work-up to 3 months) ...

Sunflower, "To meet the sun, 45х50, canvas, with photos, with small changes (sorry, still not seen after the new year no one living, even though we now +20) :)

You are my frank shokiruete! And I'm trying.
They too were in the trash :------ always respected people keen painter and not only us raduyte other works. "With humor I have always been tightly .:)

Hold -
pier Radish bitter, but useful:

The first picture did not cause me irritation. Yes, shortcomings dofiga, even for an amateur, but she would not go.

Now, about sunflowers:
Have you ever noticed how vulgar looks like a woman, if her time and a short skirt and cleavage? when she's at the same time clearly wearing makeup and lips and eyes?
You nakrasili his sunflower and lips and eyes. "
That fascinated you something (in this case, sunflower). Why do you have such a cloud in the sky? You could make the sky-blue monotonously. Would have been a quite ordinary-a dekorativka.
Can be monotonous gray (if it is good to find shade, and texture - might have done quite a good dekorativka).

And could very well think, and leave that line the horizon - then would happen to the sun-sunflower looks at the world from the heavens. Only it is necessary to remove all of these play-streamers in the sky, and more graphic quality to leave the plane and just division of the sky and the earth.

In the Wave I do did not find anything - it overwhelmed all the "alley", "Arbat" and "noses"

"Never write on the photo. She always betray themselves boredom. Valentin Serov.