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Dear AntonN, here are some specific comments for your reference:

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Personal exhibitions in London, Paris, Geneva, Ankara, Oslo, Prague, Vienna, Moscow, Dublin and other cities.

For personal exhibitions is desirable to specify a specific location (museums, galleries, etc.) and date (year is sufficient) of

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was exposed together with Kandinsky V., Larionov, M., Shevchenko, T., Glazunov, VI, Shilov, A., K. Korovin, A. Zverev, etc.

This infa looks really anecdotal. We can only guess that you are here meant. You may wish to say that on those shows, which were attended your person involved, and the works were exhibited above-mentioned artists. Usually such information is not written, but you wrote clearly reads as a personal acquaintance and co-operation of your helper with these gentlemen. Can you imagine that the thought of all who read your Old. Any unbiased person perceives written, as your desire to prove that your person involved and referred to the artists - are artists of one level. The point, of course, yours, but I, for example, after reading this passage, just stopped to take seriously everything that is written yet.
If your figurant participated in some joint or group exhibitions - just list them, just as in the previous paragraph, that is, with the name of the exhibition space (galleries, museums, etc.), city, year.

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His paintings are in museums and private collections in forty countries, in the collections of Presidents Reagan, Meterana, Milosevic, Nakasone, Andreotti, ambassadors, and parliamentarians of many countries.

Any normal person would like to see here a specific list of institutions, bought the product of your helper (preferably just bought, but have not received as a gift). Collection of politicians, with rare exception, are just what they Nadaraya. Usually, these personalities in the arts do not understand - they have very different purposes and in a professional environment authority do not enjoy. It is interesting for the secular crowd. If you rely on it - you might as well leave. Just when you are applying at. Not to mention the fact that, under the name Meterana apparently hiding Mitterrand?

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in 1993. were bought several works by representatives from Sothebys.

This information is not clear, therefore, raises questions. If these works were sold at Sotheby's - specify when, if the employee had bought Sotheby's in their own use of these works - it is nothing said. Own collection at Sotheby's is not.